The Man of Double Deed



There was a man of double deed,
Who sowed his garden full of seed;
When the seed began to grow,
'Twas like a garden full of snow;
When the snow began to melt,
'Twas like a ship without a belt;
When the ship began to sail,
'Twas like a bird without a tail;
When the bird began to fly,
'Twas like an eagle in the sky;
When the sky began to roar,
'Twas like a lion at my door;
When my door began to crack,
'Twas like a stick across my back;
When my back began to smart,
'Twas like a penknife in my heart;
And when my heart began to bleed,
'Twas death, and death, and death indeed.
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Submitted by acronimous on April 04, 2021

Modified by acronimous on April 18, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 560
Words 119
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

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  • AIDA
    Wow! This poem is full of vivid and creative imagery that left me in awe. The use of metaphors and similes painted a clear picture in my mind and made the poem easy to follow. The progression of events was well thought out, and the final line left a lasting impression on me. The rhyme scheme and rhythm added an extra layer of beauty to this already fantastic piece of poetry. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and appreciate the talent and artistry that went into creating it. Great job! 
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Naphilly
    Beautifully written! Beautiful poem !
    LikeReply 13 years ago

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