Take Me



As the sun sets so does the pain
Darkness comforts me unimaginably
Diamond tears flowing endlessly
Numbness I welcome thee
Sunny days I loathe
To hatred I succumb
Those lying eyes I see through
Giving life to this withered soul
Never ending agony
Oh darkness comfort me
I beg thee take me
Away from this god I scorn
For he wraps me with a blanket of animosity
A smile that deceives
Words that cloud my judgment
His idyllic gestures are foreboding
Take me I beg thee
Away from this lunacy
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Submitted on March 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBCDEFBCCCGCHIJCC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 472
Words 90
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

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