Apathetic wind



Floating in the air, the windy breeze
All the tears and smiles were gone.

Like the mist
Floating my memories
The torn wire of the harp
Speech of consciousness
Gave me a summon.

With anxiety, kept the door open
Sit in excitement
Relaxed! Never knew
Hold tight the stir again
Hanging in my neck, the loser’s chain.
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Submitted by hakikur on March 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XAXXB BXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 303
Words 57
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 5

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