Fix you



And her day started with chirp of birds,
all surprises visited her onwards.

but in a flash of second her life was hacked,
where pleasure,joy,exhilaration was stolen from behind.

only leaving tears of ache and broken heart
darkness was when her hub of life was scalded depart.

when every second felt so trammel,
all ray's of hopes made her awful.

Ensuingly the almighty God caught her in his wings,
showing the way lead life not able to swing.

when no one was on her side,
it was God who was beside.

darkness was way stronger and did not let her live,
but the one beside her gave her gleam to live.

no one can fix us until we fix ourselves,
just surrender God yourself and be oneself.

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Submitted by magdalina on March 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA XX BB CC XX DD EE XX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 670
Words 130
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

Mary Magdalina

Mary Magdalina a little girl going through the dark time,She has been writing poems for the peace in her mind and to come out from the dark world.She is the writer since most recently,known as and SECRET WEAPON OF POETRY. Her first poem , THE BRAVE ONE I KNEW: Who fights to get freedom from the world– was published.. . Her work has helped many to bring the love,peace and happiness. Her passion for the writing makes her prove as a featured writer. FROM: Telangana- Hyderabad. more…

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  • hipp
    I really loved the way you put ur words in ... really such fellings u have put
    in
    LikeReply 23 years ago

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