A Recollection, In Deep Thoughts

Hala Hameed 1963 (Maldives)



A Recollection, in Deep Thoughts!

Was that your footsteps, Ma?
Receding into the nightly darkness,
Was that your caress, Ma?
with the breeze that blew past,
Was that your fragrance, Ma?
That touched my soul so profoundly,
Was that your voice, Ma?
Echoing deep into my mind,
Did you just gently remind me, Ma?
Of the earthly do’s and don’ts,
Did you just gently stare at me, Ma?
In that earnest look that captivates,
As I delve my thoughts into the mighty sky,
Where stars endless shine up above,
As I wake up from that dreamy gaze,
Into the reality of you not being there?
Amen!
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Submitted on March 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BXBXBXBXBABXXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 566
Words 106
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 17

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