~ In My Shoes ~



Every mile I walk
I am drained
Every one I try to remember
Every one I forget

 For each step
I loose my power
I try to remember
Everyone I forget
The winds blow a different
direction each hour

 The longer the stride
I try to remember
Every one I forget
The harder to survive
This is not the
end of me yet

 Every day I try to remember
Every day I forget
If only I knew
The years that have past,
 when wearing my shoes
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xxaB xaAbxa xABxxb abxxx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 396
Words 86
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 6, 5

Yvonne Sensing

I've been writing since I was a kid...I enjoy putting thoughts onto paper it's like clearing out my mind. I'm not saying I'm good, but I try. Still I write, but the thoughts in my head get jumbled and it all comes out wrong. I know what I want to say, I hope it comes out that way. Anyway, I still write maybe to leave a little piece of me behind. Not here to cause trouble or be a hero. I am a kind person with a big heart and I only do what makes me feel good. Poetry happens to make me very happy and joyful. Sharing my most inner thoughts makes me a target it seems, with folks that don't like me. I assure I am not a hater, but I will stand up for myself for what's right and true. This site has made me feel like were all family and here for each other not a place to bicker and fight among us, but to enjoy each others work with respect and love. Please understand I am not here to cause problems, I am here for the same reasons you are. more…

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