Would you?



Would you share
What you bear
Please tell me all
Let the tears fall
I will ease your pain
And hold you in the rain

Would you believe
That what I feel
Was always real
Which I concealed
And always evinced
As you vanished
In your hurting fence

Would you feel
If I evince
In my touch of your skin
How I am weak
To those pouty lips

Would you concede
If my hands meet
Your soaked face
And embrace
When you're weak

Would you lose
If I use
The dark of the night
To bring the light
By flaming your fence
And let you sense
The nuances of my love

And would you love
When this passion leaves us
Or with the light
You'd fade from my sight
But as the fervour fills
I understand you will

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Submitted on January 26, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABBCC XDDXXXE DXXFX XXGGF XXHHEEI IXHHXX H
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 652
Words 140
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 5, 5, 7, 6, 1

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