With A Quiet Pop



With a sigh that fluttered a primary
extreme sensation the entertainer
followed motion: a solitary breeze-
bobbed balloon; spherical coloured delight
in the eyes of so many small children.
Painted expression belied emotion
as his heart stumbled across memory,
such a long time now in the past's features,
where his vision of adulthood was not
tainted by sorrow's tight-fisted hard grip.
Theatrical performance whispered songs
into his mind's cool rippled confusion
before another's wild laughter caught him.
The present returned with a quiet pop,
scenery floated into focus while
make-up applied itself under his nose:
comical saturated hues of shade;
matched by his bright new massive floppy shoes.
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEEAFGHIEJKLMNO
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 682
Words 108
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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