When You Can't Go On



When you can't go on you can go off
the path that caused you pain.
All failed crusades you can scoff
and fight a new campaign.
When you can't go on you can go back
to a happier time.
All harsh timbres you can track
and ring a soft wind chime.
When you can't go on you can go through
the door of sunny day.
All dead flowers you can strew
and style a fresh bouquet.
When you can't go on you can go down
the stream of calm recess.
All awkward steps you can clown
and make a smart progress.
When you can't go on you can go far
into a sacred place.
All fear and doubt you can bar
and do an about-face.
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Submitted on February 05, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 577
Words 125
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Wallace Dean LaBenne

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