What Did You Love About Me ?



What did you love about me ? say it and don't be shy.
Life is short, who knows if I will be awake or dead.
Awake with new hopes, dead of dreaming of new hopes.

What did you love about me ? In those four seasons.

In spring , I'm a man who sing to flowers, and pour of mine
Own tears to roses and create a new rose represent my sorrows.

In summer, I'm someone who sit alone in front of beach.
Talking to him about a missing love that I can't find it anywhere.

In autumn , I'm a dead tree, giving my words away to people.
No one read about my sadden and about my broken heart.

In winter, I'm almost similar to the snow man but I live inside four walls.
A dusty body, who gets to revive as a gift from Christmas to me.

What did you love about me ? Say it so I can change from this moment.
It's never too late, I won't let the nightmares be in our life.
I will stay awake during your present and die if you won't wake up.

What did you love about me ? In a whole year together.

In a mouth, I will make it a holiday for thirty one days so I won't miss
A single moment of your love with me, since I spent my youth alone.

In a week, I will change the universe and bring the moon and sent
The sun away from earth, just so you feel a bit of who I am before and now.

In a day, I will undress my sadness skin to wear my white suit within my
Pocket with a small box inside a ring of purposing you as my wife forever.

In a hour, I will speak with you a different language perhaps I will speak
A language that was never written or road by anyone, it's written by your scent.

1/7/2014
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Submitted on August 25, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AXX X XX XX XX XX XXX B XX CX AB XC
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,543
Words 323
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2

Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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