Very moments



When we exchanged hands at that intense eve
I managed to write these  faint subtle lines
My eyes wove love threads though could not say much
The noise rose high my tunes withered away
The days like falling leaves and sorrowful footpaths
The star vanished in my dreams was yours
When I take your hand in mine fully excited
My unsung song wakes up on my lips again
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Submitted on July 12, 2014

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 355
Words 68
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8

Shantanu Chindhade

I am an eye specialist practicing in Pune city for the last 25 yrs or so.Writing poetry in my mother tongue for the last 45 yrs .My two collections are released.English poetry is a new avenue for me and I am trying my best to come out.I write prose as well.I run a group of amateur poets and writers in Pune city for the last 27 yrs just to keep my interest alive in literature and literary world. more…

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