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Up so high

Desiree Brooks

We flew up too high
In the unfortunate sky
Til we couldn't come down
Squarely on the ground
So we danced around
It was not understood
By the bosses in the neighborhood
No jobs could be found
By those dancing around
Our feet had their own will
Would not be curtailed
Though warned long ago
By the ones in the know
We thought they were mean
Were just stealing our dreams
Let us, up so high, in the sky
Fall down squarely on the ground, now
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 421
Words 86
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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Desiree Brooks

I am a nurse and a mother of three grown children. I have been writing poetry since I was a teenager. I love expressing myself on paper. I am a pastor's wife. We pastor a small church in Media, Pa. We are presently debating with a group of people on U-Tube who say that the world will end on May 21, 2011. Our U-Tube channel is, pastorBillandDesi more…

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