Unfortunate Love



Does he or she think your funny?
Do they touch your heart when they sense it thumping?
Not a net worth to form love as money
Sticky icky feelings while its sweet like Sugar,
Overide criticism negelect the on lookers,
Respect all women fall back from calling them hookers,
Or situations could get messy like a Snot from a booger,
Part time lovers shouldn't have to suffer,
Full time dedicated couples need each other,
Like sister,cousin,brother,father daughter,son & mother,
Climbing up a mountain or drinking from a fountain,
Hills are stumps broken up like Money to Accountants,
Love is rare like a ton of treasure if you found it.
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Submitted on April 14, 2015

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Traveon Jermaine

I'm Traveon or you can call me Tra for short I've been writting poetry since I was about 14 years old. I'm a 4 time poet Award Receiver (2 Editors Choice Awards,Published Poet Award & The International Who's Who In Poetry Award) My 1st Editors Choice Award was for my poem What is Love and the 2nd was for my poem Dream. And the 3rd one I received was The Published Poet Award which is for my poem Love and Pain and I've always seen poems as a way of life. My 4th Award The Who's Who In Poetry Award was in honoree of me making relatable poems and also heart felt poems as well as being active here in The Poetry world of Poetry.com. Also I often base all of my poems off of my life experiences and what I've been through over the years. I also have 1 of my poems (What Is Love?) published in The Book "Collected Whispers" which is officially from the organization The Poetry Library. I like to always give my best effort into my work while inspiring others to keep doing well with theirs too. I don't criticize I only motivate and that's something that I will continue to do in the years to come. more…

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