Unconditional love



Unconditional love
could it be a truth?
The sun shining down upon our eyes
The tears of rain dripping past out dreams
feeling lost,so many thoughts
Unsure about the future
Fears embed their ugly faces

take a deep breath and breath you in
A feeling so unreal
its like a dream come true
Why and how
where and when
Life and love
Let us do it again

I never knew
you ever existed
Until the sun cam and dried up all my tears
The look in your eyes
eyes like green emeralds
My heart stopped and got lost in the breeze from you words
Help me please I'm falling

Take me deeper,and never let go
The fear you Slade
and hope you brought alive
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Scheme AXBXXXX XXCXDAD CXXBXXX XXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 606
Words 126
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 3

Kristen Lacey Jacobs

Hello My name is Lacey(soon to be jacobs) Iam 18 and layed back,somewhat shy at times. The reason i write poetry is to show my emotions and let people see that anything is possible if you try,I have battled with many mental disorders,aswell as a few physical disorders since i was 10,And around the age of 10 i was diagnosed with Depression,bipolar,border line persoanllity disorder and many others,It was very hard for me in school,due to bulling,I tried to go though school till 12th,But due to my problems i went into homeschooling in 7th than again tried public school,But it didnt turn out any better,So now iam working on my GED and becuase of my few fmailly members i ahve and finding the love of my life Kevin jacobs,Ive been able to go so much more further than ive ever gone,i pour my heart out to the ones i love and to others suffering with the same problems as me,But my poetry shows who iam,It shows things ive been through and expresses what i cannot in plain words,Poetry to me is one of the most beautiful forms of art and i respect all who write poetry. more…

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