Too Heavily Broken



Too Heavily Broken
Too Desperately Choking
I'm Drowning Beneath Crimson Waves

I can't take it anymore
I know what's in store
as I wretch and I writhe in pain

My head starts spinning
There's no use in winning
Both this battle and this war

This all seems propostrous
This headache is monstorus,Everything I feel I abhor

My head starts to sway
a cyclone of pain
as i drag myself to the nearest seat

In my head there's a bullet
Feels like two dogs trying to pull it
apart but then this sensation appears

I'm suddenly freed
The pain's taken heed
and leaves my head without warning
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Submitted on April 15, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAB CCD AAC BC XDX XXX EEA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 556
Words 107
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3

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