This World (Revised)



This world: vast, complicated, and cold –
mostly cold – frozen over
and all together impassable
with its high, proud ignorance.
The senses capture nothing
hearing becomes dulled,
taste and smell are naught,
touch and sight are all but forgotten.
Rotten and writhing, the people
people of this world – are dying,
and piteously carry on, trying
to regain that which they did not fear to lose.
Long ago they did choose passivity –
and pure lack of care
sent them here – to darkness
doomed to forever grapple for the light.
Calling forward night, and ignoring
that quiet whisper of wit,
carried them down a river
a river that completed the mental death.
The lost, tortured souls – bereft
and left to darkness
are suffering through a world of Hell
for they gave up their intelligence.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHCEEIJKLMENBOPLQD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 788
Words 142
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

Kassandra M. Konecny

Kassandra Konecny is a lover of listening to music, hiking in the mountains, and observing the way people act. She began writing vigorously when she was fourteen and will hopefully never stop. She has had her fair share of trials lately, and tries to encompass nearly every subject there is to study into her writing. Kassandra plans to study creative writing and psychology. She's 17 and currently lives in Utah with her family. Contact her at kassandrakonecny@hotmail.com more…

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