The Rule to Success



Have you ever realize that to see a rose opening
Would be smililar to see the sun rise
To see an egg hatch
Or to see a miracle happen

They ask us to be patient and offers something beautiful
Just like the promises that God offers you
They reguire your full attencion
They reguire your full imagination
They reguire your full concertration
Just to recieve what you have always wanted

In this case, you would see the beauty of the rose
The sun rising in the way you never saw before
The birth of an animal waiting for its mother´s hug
And the miracle manifesting infront of your eyes

When each momets are cherished by heart
When each of them were waited, and fought from the start
When the stuggle is done, there you have it
Waiting for you to take it
Waiting for you to enjoy it

This is the rule to reach success which is also the rule that has never changed
For me, love is the same way
You wait with your heart wide open
Waiting for someone who can finaly close it
But once it get there it will be the most beautiful thing you have ever seen
The only thing that is invisible but can be seen
Because its nature is all we need
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Submitted on May 08, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXB XXBBBX XXXA CCDDD XXBDEEX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,106
Words 220
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 5, 7

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