The Room, Grandfather, Lulu, and I



A small study lamb,
a tea cup with sharpened lead pencils
(number two),
 polished wooden panels:
walls dressed in masks
 (African vodun mugs).

An old stone fireplace with
portrait of colored girls
dancing above stained hardwood mantel.

Lulu, with a mind as dull as the room,
hung her thoughts out for scrutiny.
Shadows waltz in faint glow,
and smell send eyes searching
and minds speculating
about smudges on worn carpet.

From the door,
dark antique table stood smug,
on feline's legs, in a corner to the left.
Grandfather clock with pendulum,
a tongue that utters time.

A gem tells of certainty,
and minds were compelled and led captives,
but Lulu and her tactless wit
could never fathom why grandpa ran.

Grandfather ran when liberty summoned,
and this room expresses a life
that is far too deep for her to clutch.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Scheme XAXAXX XXX XBXCCX XXXXX BXXX XXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 789
Words 140
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 6, 5, 4, 3

Earle Francis Brown

I was born in Montego Bay, Jamaica. I was told that I can write, so I wrote and continues to write. I am currently living in Cincinnati, Ohio, USA. I enjoy reading "real" poetry. My favorite books are the Pslams, Proverbs and Songs of Solomon.Poetry is not just vocabulary, and use of metaphors and formats. Don't be tricked. Poetry should speak life. I love a poem that tells a story. The most memorable poems are the ones that tell someone's story. I don't care about ratings; the truth is always hated. People are people where-ever we go. more…

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