THE LOSERZzzzzz



The men of this world
ain't nothin but trouble
so if you think you found true love
sorry to bust your bubble!!!

Another woman born
he use adorn her
then he scorned her
now her family morns her

He ripped an torn her
hand and feet beat her
even in the streets the
back slaps when men would greet her

He would always creep cheat hershe would beg him to stop please
every two months
another Venereal Disease

Dropped her thirty-six degrees
without separation
home confinement was her life
with no chance for probation

Her only vacation
was a trip to the store
deep in her heart
she could only dream of more

Her life was a bore
she suffered depression
how long will it be
till she endured this lesson

Could it be transgression
that caused her stress'n
and the fear of her fear
made her not question his aggression

She couldn't count a single bless'n
not even her life
a slave after slavery
ball and chain on a wife

Her game of life trifle
she thought about the rifle
put it in her mouth
and blow her brains out

But that's the wrong route
as she grew up a Christian
and faith is the one thing
that she wasn't miss'n

She longed for hugs and kiss'n
but got beat into submission
and verbally abused
by his thug diss'n and bitchen

One day in the kitchen
cook'n up crack
to much powder in the skin
brought his real sin back

He started act'n wack
like Tony Montana
shaved his head bald
and wore a Tupac bandanna

Lost control of when he ran the
project halls
you know how the cookie crumbles
when the Oreo falls

His word and his balls
he lost them too
he was wanted on the street
by the boys in blue

His connect crew too
man they wanted him dead
you know an addict gone snitch
avoid'n three hots and a bed

Now there's a price for his head
so he had to flee
he said "it's cheaper to keep her
but chicken ain't free

Two mouths to feed
but I can only feed me
and plus the blind can't see
so where the she gonna lead me

As she went to go pee
he grabbed his things and left
with one word "B***H"
under his breath

Jumped in his hoopty
headed West
put the Kush in his chest
checked the clip in his nine
that he kept in his vest

His chick under duress
heard a knock at the door
went to explore
(((who is it)))
and got hit with the four-four

Before she hit the floor
she thought
"WHY LORD... WHY"
one shot ripped through her shoulder blade
the other through her eye

She felt herself die
think'n "what a relief"
no more broken rips
no more loose teeth

Now she's rest'n in peace
and two cities away
the one that led her astray
would one day pay.
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Submitted on July 31, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABXB CDDD DDED FXF FGHG GIXI IGJG GKXG KHJH BBXX XGXK KGXC GLXL LEXC EMXM MNXN NOXO OJDJ XJJJ JXXX APPXP XIIXI IXQXQ QXXX XRRR
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,419
Words 495
Stanzas 25
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 5, 5, 4, 4

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