The Freshman



Nauseating heat:
Perspired forehead collides in relief
With a damped polka-dot hankie
Every three and the half minutes.

Restless feet,
Released from a sandal's death-grip,
Rubbing each others backs offensively-
Wanting to start a mild fight.

Faux-leathered seat,
Dripping sweat bombs down the sides,
Like a volcano in glory spits out lava-
With no apologies nor regrets.

Your heart beat:
Lost in the rhythm of the ride's bravery,
Trying to comprehend the idea of
This bus taking you to an adulthood.

Good luck, you thought,
Here I come!
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXX AXBX AXXX ABXX XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 519
Words 88
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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