The first rain.



There was I, battling:
Struggling for knowledge, arithmetic;
Troubled by restless mosquitoes
Seeking to dance on my skin
For a suck of pure blood.

I was as restless as the hum
Of these reckless nonsenses;
Squeezing and shoving;
Clapping, slapping and clamouring;
Chanting some silent prayers:
'What comfort would I'v known,
Should I leave for my abode,
Away from these wretched mosquitoes
Not willing to let me be!'

Then,
Pitty-Patty, Pitty-Patty,
As a song on my ears,
The voice of the roof rang.

Unconcerned, no,
Seeming unaware,
I kept to my wars
Until I drifted into nature,
Sensing the silent sounds
Of the first drizzle of the year:
The rain is here at last!

Though it never touched down,
Yet I was glad there was a sign
Of another year of showers
Hidden beneath the mask of drizzles,
Ushering in the morning dew.
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Submitted on March 05, 2011

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Scheme AXBXX XBAAXXXBC XCXX XXXXXXX XXXBX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 790
Words 144
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 9, 4, 7, 5

Pius Has Pagiel

Fresh and new, and young. Born in a village hospital in Ogidi, Anambra State of Nigeria on Tuesday, 26th September, 1989 to Mr. and Mrs. Pius Nwibo Onwe, who hail from Ndewugo-Inyimagu of IZZI LGA of Ebonyi State. My family name is Onwe Arinze Pius. Pius Has Pagiel is my pen-name. Some very close friends call me Soisese Oinese(meaning Success Onwe in my private language). I passed through Christ the King College, Onitsha and made one of the best results- I was science-inclined, though, I love literature very well. I won the best literature student award in first Senior Secondary School class before I dropped the subject for full science ones. Today, I am a student of Nnamdi Azikiwe University, Awka, Anambra State, Nigeria. Luckily, I am into Architectural Studies, a mixture of Arts and Science. I love it. I wish to be a renown poet and author in the future. I like writers like Chinua Achebe, Wole Soyinka, Ngugi wa Thiong'o, Alfred Lord Tennyson, John Keats, Wilbur Smith and several others. Let's be friends on facebook. Search my profile: Pagiel Pius Has. Mail piushaspagiel@yahoo.com. Thanks. more…

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