The Amendable Redemption



A benevolent soul rises above the din
Only to be forever lost in a myriad of pessimistic logic
Caught up in the momentum of indifference,
A fortuitous proclamation passions for reason
Calling the fortunate one to understanding
Definitive want supercedes excessive need
A rhetorical posture of an intemperate disposition
Symbolically forsakes the typical magnanimous mind-set
This meticulously calming upshot awakens the inert
And with it secured a renewed sense of serenity
To forgo volatile emotions, ramparts are relinquished!
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFDGHIJ
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 518
Words 78
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11

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