suddenly apart




we are suddenly apart....
and you broke my heart..
i never thought that you would that to me anyway
our love story was more than a fairytale !!
but it is now over because of my silly mistake..
our song is on the radio,but it doesnt sound the same
and here i am without you ,like a bird with 1 wing !!
am broken....can you hear me?
i need you ....can you feel me?
we are now done...but cant we fix it?

i remember every word you said to me ...and how you made me smile
i still feel your hand on my hand ....and how i looked at you with admire :'(
now suddenly everything went wrong...
and it is killing ME and i cant be strong
we loved each other for 3 years continously
but you took my mistake  so unbearably
that made you freely sell me without any sympathy
you feel satisfied for that break up.....
and i feel bad cuz we cant make up
if u can give me one more chance ...to say am sorry
but you turned your face away...and left me there with worry

what a beautiful gift you are giving me !!
before the valentine's day u call and break up with me..!!
when u said :we need to talk.!...i knew that we are going to fall apart!!
how is it so easy for you, to let me go after all the love i gave to you ..!!
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAXBXXXCCX XXDDBCCEECC CCAX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,177
Words 247
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 11, 4

Nadine M.oraby

heyoo !! am Nadine !! an 18 year old egyptian girl!! =D i'm a ballerina,a guitarist and a writer :Dwell actually writing is a hobby..am not really A professional writer but my friends like my poems and think am really talented :) !! so i decided to post my poems here on that site to see your comment about my poems>>>some let me down and some encouraged me to continue writing and correct my mistakes :D thats really great to learn from the greatest poets !! =D i love photography too!! well,i hope you would read my poems and tell me what you think :) dont worry ,i dont bite :-p more…

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