Submissive That I Am!



I come to you as humbly as I know how...

 mind clear

 Heart-felt devotion

 My deepest apologies

 Even the Stars and the Moons feel my pain

 I come to you not the same.

 I come to you as woman once again

 Smarter

 Stronger

 Courteous

 I come to you as humbly as I know how...

 Head down

 Heart-felt devotion

 MY sincere apologies

 Even my eyes can't deceive me

 I come to you not the same.

 I come to you as a woman once again

 Not Me

 Not she

 Yet Yours

 I come to you as humbly as i know how...

 On my knees at your feet

 Heart-felt devotion

 My deepest apologies

 Even my mind feels my pain

 I come to you not the same

 I come to you as a woman once again

 Stead-fast

 Understanding

 Knowledgeable

 I come to you as humbly as i know how...

 Tears cleansing your feet

 Heart-felt devotion

 My sincere apologies

 My face will not hide my need

 I come to you not the same

 I come to you as a woman once again

 Patient

 Pure

 Continuously progressing

 I come to you as humbly as i know how...

 Heart-felt devotion

 Clear mind

 My deepest and most sincere apology

 Anyway you have me, i will without hesitation

 I come to you not the same.

 I come to you once again a CONFIDENT woman.
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Submitted on September 02, 2012

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A B c D e A B f D E A g B c D E A g B x D E A f h D h
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,135
Words 225
Stanzas 27
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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I am what you call a writer. I just don't do poetry. I write short stories, songs, poems, slam poetry. My style is very unique. Started writing when i was 9. The poem titled "A Stranger" was my first poem i wrote. I joined this site to get honest opinions on my writing before i place together a book. I've won allot of contest for my orginallity and have been requested to read my poetry. Right now i am just trying to figure out do i want to further this gift or leave it as a hobby. The poems that seem like conversations are from me being in the BDSM and Swingers LifestyleThe poems that are on love yet seem incomplete are from pre-teen years, when i would say i was to young to completly understand the concepts and in/outs of love. hence the reason why they seem incompleteThe slam poetry are from major events in my life. Break ups, Heartaches, Deaths, Cheating and other situations.The spiritual poetry was usually because someone passed that i was close to. Again all this writing goes back to 17 years or more. more…

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