Still undefeated!!!: poetry.Com'S most controversial 2.0
I let no one get away with anything. This is the ugliest truth about those who still tried to dehumanize me. I always get the final say. The final word.
I will forever feel everything that I write
I will forever write everything that I feel
It doesn't matter if one states I'm wrong or right
Don't they know by now that I keep it way too real?
This young black rose is beginning his rebirth
And will eventually regrow from concrete
He went through years of rejection and hurt
But has now swept the dust from off his feet
To those who were affected by substance addiction
You can always confide in your supportive brother
Those who are feeling loveless and have been abandoned
I was also abused and neglected by my mother
Those who have faced the demon of discrimination
I have gone through it also my brother and sister
Those who are hopeless and need some spiritual guidance
Request to say a prayer for you to my Father
And those who are fed up with goverment corruption
Let us fight for our God-given freedom together!
For every person who wakes up to the cold reality
There's someone else suffering from Cognitive Dissonance
Living in their perpetual land of trite fantasy
They are mind controlled that ignorance is forever bliss
Because I speak the ugly truth so brazenly
''The Lost Sheep'' have brutally persecuted me
Foolishly mistaked my kindness for weakness
That is when it is personnal... not business!!!
Thus I introduce to you all
''The Four Stalkers Of The Apocalypse!''
The Stalker Of Conquest:
Who with her white horse invaded into my private life
By befriending me on Facebook with a friend request
I accpeted assuming she was a genuinely nice person
Only a short time later she made false allegations
And kept attacking and attacking my character
As inherently evil this woman is in her entire being
Many poets still see her as ''kind'' and even ''righteous''
With Irenaeus the theologian as her ''Wise Man''
If only he had his theology correct the first time around
He would preach to Yvonne Sensing*
His series she spews to all of us!
The Stalker Of War:
Who with his red horse is all for bloodshed and warfare
Along with all the other neoconservative war mongers
This sheep is more than just sound asleep
He's in a coma with no possibility of ever waking up!
''I've forgotten more about black history than you will ever remember''
Is what he wrote about my MLK tribute senryu on another post
I guess maybe - just maybe - it's not entirely his fault
This is how one turns out by being taught through public school
Or perhaps it could be just another ''Texan thing''
I'm just kidding everybody!
I love all of my fellow Americans!
Calvin Carter* - on the other hand - does not
The Stalker Of Famine:
Who with his black horse is so hungry for my attention
He wrote well over thirty poems directly about me!
He even posted some of them on my poetry pages
How sweet of him to do that for ''sad, little'' me
This devil worshipper can call me whatever he wants
But he is the one with a picture of the Four Horsemen
On his poetry page filled with nothing but hateful rants
He is the little man who was too much of a coward
To simply ask me if I reported his poems abusive
I would have answered him in verbatim;
''No Richard 'The Pinocchio Poet' Acevado*.
I don't waste my time on racist trash like you.''
Instead he starts a bitter-filled racial tirade
Over an inconsequential feud that ended 4 months ago
He does after all wear clothing with an iron cross label
A symbol that is affiliated with Nazi Germany
I saw several pictures of him with it
The ignorant will still dismiss it as a symbol of ''strength''
The Stalker Of Death:
Who with her pale horse has zero credibility
Because she has zero poems posted on her page
All Elizabeth R.* does is troll demonically
Followed by her lifeless hades
Ladies and gentleman!
It's not about the quantity
It is about the quality
They served me cheap appetizers
I just served them a four-course meal
I have made several friends on this flawed website
I have gained several fans in the process too
You all are the reason I continue to write!
I now take a bow and say; ''Thank you! God bless you!''
I STILL REMAIN... POETRY.COM'S... MOST CONTROVERSIAL!!!
Those four losers threw at me so much of their sticks and stones
Yet none of them were talented enough to steal my title
They shouldn't have bothered... all they did was break their own bones!
* Initially, I did not reveal the names of ''The Four Stalkers Of The Apocalypse''. That wasn't until Ms. Yvonne Sensing further proved her true evil colors and made a condescending remark in response to my personal review of this very piece. I also want to add that I didn't provoke her to leave such a nasty comment, but as the saying goes; ''Misery loves company''. When I say I have the final word, I truly do mean it! Why won't these people ever learn?
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Submitted on August 21, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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