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Spaceships

Jason Mui

thoughts going
a mile a minute

my mind
is running a marathon

and i'm getting
left behind

will i make it
to the finish

is there a real
destination in mind?

or is it all about
the journey taken?

lost in a labyrinth
with no way out

now clouded
with so much doubt

think i'll launch
another spaceship
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Submitted on March 07, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX BX AB XX XB CX XC XC XX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 278
Words 58
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
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