Souls joining



my eyes meet yours in heated gaze
your touch slowly setting my body ablaze

 ever nerve bracing for your intensity
 as we move closer i begin to lack ability

then our bodys meet, melting into one
all my senses scream, sanity undone

smoldering touch sends us ever higher
hearts beat as one, i can go no further

still you stoke the fire, fueling my insanity
with one deep thrust i lose all clarity

in your arms i lay, nerves alive i quiver
i give to you all that i am body and soul forever
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Submitted on February 22, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AA BB CC DD BB DD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 475
Words 94
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

Tamara Hart

hello I am a 50yr old mother of five and grandmother of seven. i just recently married my best friend of ten years, i dont know what took us so long, all i know is that we were meant to be he is truly my soul mate. about 20yrs ago i wrote all the time i managed to put together a book of poems called growing pains but as i am poor at spelling and punctuation and there was no such thing as lap tops and no spell check i trusted a close friend to edit it, i failed to keep my own copys why i dont know well i never saw her or the book again. most of the poems were painful dark heart felt poems because my life was in a really bad place and i felt like a fool for trusting her. well i refused to write after that for a long time then life started getting better as i grew and searched intill i found my self i started thinking about writing again but as i had only written from a place of intense pain i had no idea where to start so i wasted 20yrs of living what i now realize could have been great verse. than on the night of my wedding i wrote two souls joining and my new husband got his first look at my verse and was impressed {of course he is biased] i often tell him that if the world could see me thru his eyes life would be a trip. well anyways he started encouraging me to to atleast write ten min a day. well that was sept 13th and i feel as tho i have found my voice again and this time i found my self able to write both happy and sad. i look forward to sharing my work with all of you and injoying all your wonderful writes as well. and who knows maybe someday i will come across a book of poetry called growing pains and all that will matter is that its being read. i wish you all many great writes and i thank you all from the bottem of my heart for the time you spend reading my work thank you for the input. be blessed more…

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