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Sobbing mind..

Shantanu Chindhade

Sheep were grazing in fields
Sky was flooded with clouds
I was still at nearby stream
My mind sobbed and sobbed aloud..
Some where in deep woods
Winter took its heavy toll
Tender song oozed in my heart
Slipped away in lonely path
Light was trapped in air
Breath was whistling flute
Memories opened their wings
I got cramps in my legs
Sheep were still grazing
Clouds trickled ..rains came
As i reached door steps
My mind sobbed and sobbed again...!

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Submitted on April 20, 2015

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Shantanu Chindhade

I am an eye specialist practicing in Pune city for the last 25 yrs or so.Writing poetry in my mother tongue for the last 45 yrs .My two collections are released.English poetry is a new avenue for me and I am trying my best to come out.I write prose as well.I run a group of amateur poets and writers in Pune city for the last 27 yrs just to keep my interest alive in literature and literary world. more…

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