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So when are we going on this dat you promise me John

Taleshia G MCcray

Loving you is so great
to me John.You said can
make me happy so what about
that dat you promise me John
I'm wait for you to as me out
on a dat.So when are we going on
this dat you promise me?
I hope you can keep a promise
John? You said we are together
why don't you call me on
the phone John.
I thank God for you.
I will always love you.
I love you with all my
heart and soul.
It alot of mans in the
world but they is only
one I want and is name is
John.You are only person you
got my heart and don't let it go.
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDCDEFGDDHHIJKELHM
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 493
Words 118
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
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