Ring



Guitar strings out sweet sunshine
Piano`s loaded w/ Prem & Pride
Come my sweet heart light up the sky
Attend to my free-flying fireflies!
All the woods lit up
Seeing you in me
Swinging and winnowing love rhymes
aaaaallllllaaaaakkkkknnnnannnnnndddddaaaaaaaa
Remembers the nite
I was ploughing
You`re parking
K-turns,u-turns,parallel,left,right

Seamen of Adam played,prayed in your Shrine
Temple bells ring
Rhythmic rills
Feel like a lonely lark lurking,begging Peace
round,around in your Love Ring
Where forever the love unbares her dreams
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDXXXBXCEB AEDXEX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 521
Words 86
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 6

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