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Reminiscence and Break Up (9)



Reminiscence

It was when I just came into icq world,
You said hello! In your friendly mood.
I was then afraid to talk and to know you,
For I haven't any clue of what kind of person I am chatting to...

We chat a little bit, and then we quit.
Not after awhile when I was back again on net;
You came on line and send a , “Hi!”
But I could not recalled, so I had to say goodbye!

You helped me to remember you,
By helping me to remember certain clue.
I smiled to myself, I was abled to recapitulate,
The last time we had met.

That moment you shared to me your web page,
It was beautifully made; I was so impressed of how it was made.
I felt so honor to meet such intelligent human,
Full of knowledge and wisdom.

As the conversation went on,
You asked about me, “Are you alone?”
I didn't know what to say,
For I didn't have a clue why you want to know about me.

You requested me to view my photos;
I shared to you my very first photo shoot.
You expressed I'm quiet different from all you have met;
You said to me:” Dear, You are most caring I ever met on the net.

When I heard such sweet adjective words,
I tried to be tactful the best I could.
My heart started to beat faster,
For I have sense a future trouble might fester.

Because it's an unfortunate,
There's no more room for more than friendship.
You were persistently persistent!
To share your strong desire and interest.

I explained to you the three category of love,
And giving you a hint what is Eros, phileo and agape love.
You respectfully disagree with me,
You still saying you love me trully.


For you haven't meet such a lady,
So contrary like me.
I give in to your longing,
And took the imagination to the sea;

We were then enjoying the walk and talk,
And felt the breezed blowing as we walk.
We enjoyed the forceful sound of the water so brave,
Hitting the shore as they playfully wave.

As the sun closer to the horizon,
The sea start to calm down.
With a gentle waves hugs the shore,
I feel the serenity of my soul.


It was so solemn and peaceful moment,
When we watch the sun beam slowly hiding behind the mountain.
Just then we turn to each other,
Speechless staring one another.


With silent messages in the eyes,
A love that can't be satisfied.
The day has spent fully with so much fun,
Enjoying the nature under the sun.

I suggested its time to head home,
I see dark clouds passing by and turned around.
The wind started to feel chilly,
And funny feelings hover all over me.

You beg for more moment along the sea,
To spend more time with me.
I have agreed about your plea,
And an idea came to me...

I reached out to picked up my harp,
I sang and played it softly...
The way you heard the melody,
It's just like serine on the sea.

Through the music you heard that day,
It stirred your inner soul and longed to be with me.
You stated to me, how much in love you can be!
You long to hold my hand and kiss me tenderly...

But I said, “It can't be done.”
For current is frictions, we might not be able to control.
The restrictions you have heard,
It causes you more to feel weird...

For you realized I was the one whom your heart adore.
I don't know if it is bad or good at all;
To fall in love but in vain,
Is just like a food menu but cannot order in.

If I ask my common sense,
No one should ever trust the on line game.
But check what kind of love there in…
It might just an Eros love that was only temporary then...

It was then last night,
When we decided to break up.
Not because we hate each other,
But to avoid to get involved further...

We know it can't be done,
For the sake of our convictions;
To our faith and to our obligations,
Now my friend, goodbye and farewell!

Memories in the past can not be forgotten,
For it rooted down deeply with in.
The things we said and done,
Are curved deeply and it will never be gone!

What a wonderful reminiscence in the past,
Just remember my beloved....
My love and care for you,
Will remain intak.

Yes, it is painful to take…
When words of advice to forget.
But, I have faith in us,
That we will be alright.

Will cause so much sadness and pain,
Thank you for your understanding.
Things just can't be continued between us;
But our friendship will remain if you will ask.

Till heaven and earth standing
This Reminisce will remain;
Sealed with tears as I look up
Please enjoy this lovely break up.

Author Ms. Ging (Benignheart)
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Submitted on October 02, 2013

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Ging Alburo D.

Hi Everyone! This is Ging not so tall and not so short. I came from a big family of Ten and I am the last fruit of my parents love on the first set of seven siblings. My family describe me as friendly, lively, lovely and poetic and funny; this is when I was at home in my native land and speak my own language and dialect. I speak two languages, three dialects and two dialect that I can understand but I can't speak very well. another extras,I can read Spanish but can't understand all the words, I speak few sentence. I love most of the sports and I was involved in sports during my younger years. I have passion in music and acting during my High school and college years. Graduated From O.T.C In B.S.E.ED. I started my Master but did not continue it...Its to be continued...:)I love to sing and play instruments like: guitar, piano, Auto Harp,ukelele, banjo and trying an accordion. I love life, I love to smile and laugh. I love to imagine and to dreams. I like to keep busy not sitting and doing nothing. I love vegetarian food and fruits and water to drink. I love people and I am people person. Honesty is the best policy for me. I like to be around trust worthy, Spiritual and God fearing people.I believe in simplicity is beauty,Simple but terrible ...:) I am curious person...I dislike critical, hateful person. CRITICISM without love brings destruction and LOVE without criticism brings stagnation. You have to learn to balance it. I like poetry because its an expression of our inner soul. Words that sweetly and wisely spoken are precious than silver or gold. I was told by the people when I was little, I am poet, and My Sweet told me, I have potential to be good poet if I will develop it. When I was invited to join this site, I was excited. I was motivated by the promise gift.Hehehehe When I was in high school around 10 t0 14 years old, I did not much pay attention about it, We were required to submit at least Five to Ten poems to be written in our native language; I was in panic because I waited at the last minute;So I have to ask my Sweet Aunt to help me and come up with more poems, because I had only done a four pieces.:) She was pity with me, so she agreed. In one day.., we're able to come up with the minimum requirements. Yikes! it was a close call!:) I was so pleased that the teacher was very please of the writings and my choice of words. Hehehe and she love it.:) Thanks to the founder of this poetry site, that encourage everyone to share what's in their heart and of course with the rules to follow, and review each other and help one another encourage each other. I am kind of addicted to poetry, I could not sleep when words are floating waiting to be capture. I have to get up and write it, and follow up the next day.By the way, I am sharing the Different types of Poetry, to remind you and myself of the different type so that we will have a better ideas what to write. And when we review others writing, we can understand and we can give a good judgement, kind and fair. Let us Respect each others work, Put your feet on others shoes, Look at the meaning beyond the saying of the poem, leave a comment in assertive way that will encourage me or someone to keep writing and sharing. Here is the following types of poetry: 1. Limerick- A short, humorous poem composed of 5 lines. It has rhyme scheme of aabba. 2. Haiku- A Japanese poem made up of 3 lines with a syllable pattern of 5-7-5 . Concrete- A poem that takes the shape of the poem's topic. 4. Couplet- A two-lined rhyming poem. 5. Diamante- A poem a 7 lines that begins with one noun and ends with that noun's opposite. 6. Free-verse- Poetry that does not contain regular patterns of rhythm or rhyme. Hurray! Just reach the Legendary level as I set to be reach exactly midnight of May 3rd 2012.:) Good morning to myself thanks to all the supporters.:) Hope you will reach yours too. and by the way, My Pin arrived today May 3;12.:)TY My heart flip flops! hehehe wink! I am on Tag site. Welcome to add me. I'm the founder of "You are not alone club get advice, in yahoo." You are invited to join in.:) http://groups.yahoo.com/group/youarenotalonegetadvice/join Let me know.:) Thank you for reading. Take care yourself. Be happy, easy go lucky. God bless. more…

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