Please Don't take her home



Father please save her she means the world to me,
 Please don't take her just set her cancer free,
 Father please save her this is all I ask,
 Weve got a good love and I know that it will last,
 I know it's up to you Lord whether she goes or stays,
 But I really need her so please don't take her away,
 Lord I am truly sorry for everything I done,
 But Lord I love her she is that special one,
 Lord will you save her could you please spare her life,
 The thought of loseing her cuts me like a knife,
 If there's anything I could do to help you change your mind,
 I would do anything Lord just give me sign,
 Anything you ask Lord I will humbly comply,
 I am begging Lord please don't let her die,
 I believe in your mercy and your miracles too,
 If you just spare her lifeLord there's nothing I wouldn't do,
 She's all that I ask forshe's the one I need,
 Please don't take her please don't take her from me,
 But it's up to you Lord you and yours alone,
 And I'll understand if you want to call her home
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Submitted on June 04, 2013

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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 987
Words 201
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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