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Please

Justin Miller

I'm crumbling, and falling apart
Its closing in, and crushing my heart
They all say it will be fine, it'll be okay
But I'm slowly beginning to fade
Being called daddy, god I miss her
I can't even look at myself in the mirror
I'm hurting so much inside
Its getting harder to hide
Crushing me more and more
People ask me how I'm doing, how do I look? I'm torn
I'm holding on for dear life and I'm slipping
My sanity seems to be quitting
I need her, I need to see her beautiful face
I miss her love, I miss her smile, I need that to embrace
Embrace her presence, her being here
I won't live in so much fear
please someone hold me
Please someone set me free
I love you my little Zoey
Your home is here...with me
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Submitted on March 14, 2017

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Scheme AABCDDEEFGHHIIJKLLIL
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 688
Words 143
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
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Justin Miller

I've went through so much and still am. I miss my daughter Zoey so much. Her mother thinks its best for us to not see one another for some reason. So a lot of my poetry is based on her. Missing her, and how much pain I'm going through without her. I have a good girl friend and she has been going through all of this with me. Shes a blessing to me. I love you Jenny Lynn. more…

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