Paradis Perdue



Paradise is fleeting
When chained to dark foundations
Underneath such lifeless stones,
And hidden from the Graces.

 That temple was your fury
All pompous-full of doom
Created by the filaments
You wrought to always bloom

Some men are boys in hiding
The gods they claim to be
Are equal o the greediness
In lost civility

Within the cornerstone
I poured the malice I
Could conjure for the surety
That I would never cry

Just as noon arose
And victory was near
The dust engulfed the light
And Time bethrothed us fear

The ruins of it all
I excavate to find
What was shattered then
By the worse of crimes.
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Submitted on September 30, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXX CDXD ACBC XECE XFXF XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 574
Words 109
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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