Painful separation




Your eyes and look fascinates me
 Oh what a wonderful to feel free!
 You smelt like flower's fragrance
 I consider myself a lucky by chance

 You were seemed to be an extra ordinary
 As it is must and very much necessary
 Every individual to build and maintain
 Her or his position in fray to remain

 Ocean waves send me signal
 Remind me of your arrival
 How badly I needed your presence?
 As if you were the basic need and real essence

 Not only air separates but ocean too
 This is cruel factor but reality and true
 I see in waves your shining eyes
 Red cheeks to be seen in reflection trajectory

 You remind me constantly about dream and distance
 I shall over come it resolutely at once
 It is not our fault but destiny is to be blamed
 As I have never dreamt about it and claimed

 I see the light every day
 Feel the delight with sun's ray
 You bring the shine even when I am asleep
 What a way to feel cheerful and keep!

 You blinded me with first spark
 When you smiled first day with very good start
 I flew in with fancy to cross the ocean
 The love rainbow was formed as unheard or unseen

 Remind me not about painful separation
 We have come up with sound relation
 Let it mushroom with day light and night's coolness
 Then you may witness the brightness on face
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Submitted on March 15, 2013

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Scheme AABX AACC DDBB EEXA BBFF GGHH XXIX IIXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,243
Words 239
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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