Our Sensation



I looked at my pictures with you
We were always being smiling as
if we never taste the tears of saddens

That explained now why I feel
Like a broken mirrors who's reflecting
My parting away from you now

Looking at your blue colour eyes was beautiful
To see the blue clouds Without the diamonds
Hugging around the moon

While my black colour eyes seemed turned off
The sunlight that used to share it's light to the
Moon with the stars

To see each other away from sensation that
We Used to get together with one heart
inside our souls

Your lips weren't created to hear complained
of the past out of them
 they were created to feel
The taste of sensation that grow
With more sweeten words then ever

Although my lips flew many romantics
 Thoughts just to make
You feel if you were in
My embrace sharing the love
That should being unbreakable

Now I'm wearing a concerns lover sad jacket
With my heart wearing the same one away
From others in case if they were trying
To take me away from you

Which sadly you slept and never woke up
Again to discover you went to Paradis
With tears all your body of not saying
Taking me with you as you wrote
In your commandment

14/07/2013
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Submitted on July 18, 2013

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Scheme AXX BCX DXX XXX XXX XXBXX XXXXD XXCA XXCXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,130
Words 219
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 5, 5, 4, 5

Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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