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Our last time

Karolina Marszałkowska 1993 (Gdańsk)

One step ahead
Your hands on my hips
Another move led
Your face to my lips

Music starts
Everyone listen
During slow parts
There's nothing we're missing

Violin takes lead
And piano follows
There's nothing I need
At least until tomorrow

Slowly we dance
Music shows our hunger
I fall in dark trance
Covered in mystic anger

We're circling and dying
It's our last time
I'm shouting, you're sighing
Our moment divine
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Scheme ABAB CXCD AXXX EFEF DXDX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 391
Words 72
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
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