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Opening

david holmberg

lost in thought, eyes wide shut
You wander aimlessly, further away, yet completely still
pond of dew hidden in mist - let the sun in to your shaded realm

You toss vibrations without direction
always sad, as if You missed Your target.
The magical wonder You're searching for is right Here, right Now

luminesce!
I will give You all My powers - find You brilliantly shining
like You always did, hidden by concrete leaves
Now there is no obstacle, no fear or emptiness
Now the light of a thousand suns illuminate Us

nothing left undone, no one left unseen
I can see Myself - the one behind My eyes - by looking at You
I can feel the art of the universe under my skin
Now we are truly omnipotent, Now we are God
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Submitted on August 15, 2017

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Scheme AXX XAX BXBBB XXXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 692
Words 134
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 5, 4
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david holmberg

I'm a Swedish artist with many fields of interest.My poems are often about spirituality, philosophy, love, emotions and sometimes they are even a tad nonsensical :)I have a history of depression and alot of reflection about my self, conciousness and the world. I am introverted, honest and love to delve into the different realms of art and spirituality!My poetry is very personal and I never try to mimic any other poets.While I haven't explored the stilistical forms of poetry so much I try to work with expression and painting a picture, try to keep it as free as possible. Although I might try out different forms in the future should I feel to. Aaaanyways welcome to my page, hope you enjoy yourself! Any feedback or just spontaneous reactions are much appreciated! :-) more…

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