Old is gold



Old is gold
It is not cheaply sold
It holds shine
And performs fine

The aged parent suffer
When their kids are far
Not even in position to see
Even if they are free

Some hard trick works
For calling them at home with kind words
They listen to sometimes
And ignore altogether in most of the time

Father may look jubilant
So mother side by present
Children are rare and priceless
They must see them with smiling face

I loved the honest play
Father might have found the way
It is appreciated
It is fully agreed and related

Father passed the message that they are taking divorce after 45 years of marriage. This tactic worked ,
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XXCC XXXX DDXX EEFF X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 603
Words 116
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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