No sense



He was drunk and had no sense
 Fell down on ground and remained tense
 “What will family members think about”? he thought
 He could remember and feared actual fall out

 People resort to drinking to forget heavy losses
 To get fresh ideas on how to manage other sources
 It is either love failure or deception from friends
 Under all circumstances it is surely leading to tragic end

 He had no such compelling ground
 He had no grudge against anybody or around
 Something worried him for unknown reasons
 What would happen to them if he ceases to be a living person?

 Hypothetical question and imagined worries
 He was under tremendous pressure and carried
 It was one sort of anxiety and unawareness
 That stuck to his mind and was unable to face

 What shall an ordinary man do when faced with fear?
 Go for advices from friends or lend the ears?
 If not then what is easy option to forget?
 Little pegs or two can have pressure to let go

 He missed the steps and again dashed to ground
 His balance was lost and he could never find
 Yet something troubled his mind and he missed a bit
 He was violently struck on ground and had head hit

 I saw him struggling with whatever strength he had
 He was slave of drunken stage and felt very sad
 I just extended helping hand for him to regain
 He was helpless and could hardly express in pain

 I took him to nearby safe place
 Where he can escape from vehicle's chase
 It thought of him for a while and felt sorry
 Is this the only way to forget the worries?
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Submitted on May 26, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAXX BBXX CCXX DXAE XXXX CXFF GGHH EEXD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,475
Words 276
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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