No ...never,





                  No … never,

When I was near, you never cared ..

I tried my best to get you,
I sang my best song for you,
I painted the best one I could,
I bought the costliest pendant  for you selling my wrist watch..

You never cared …..

I waited hours near the school gate
You never   turned up,
I had the best shirt borrowed from my friend,
Just to make myself nice before you ….
You didn't even notice me  for once …..

I fought with my best friend to make you feel happy
Taking away  his bicycle to see you at noon…
You didn't care to look back on  my birthday ..

I knew jenny, I was not the best fit for you
Neither was I that rich to be aside you …
Still I loved you with my  whole heart

That Sunday .. when you refused me &
Were surprised when I proposed you,
You didn't have the  heart to feel my tears

My heart bled and so did i…
I wept throught the night looking up to the sky
I knew you did not notice

No you did not love me then … never and truly never ever ….
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Submitted on August 27, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A B CCXX B XXXCX DXX CCX DCX EEX A
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 971
Words 200
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 1, 5, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1

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