Never give



Never give your life to anyone to anyone
Never give your life to person never feel you
Never give your life to person never understand you
Never give your life to anyone to anyone

Don't say he
she is too close
Don't say I love her, I love him
Even if you said she love me, he love me
Just want to hear she feel me, he  feel me
Just want to hear she understand me , he understand me

Are you understand me?
Are you want explain from me?
Ok here we go listen to me
Give you an example
I love you but I can't do what you want
I love you but can't understand you
I love you but can't feel you
I love you but I don't make you happy
Although I can do.
I love you and I want you to  be happy
But by the way I want
And if you didn't feel happy I'll be very angry
Because you should walk on my way
I love you but I really hurt you

So so are you understand me
Hope so
Then I will say
Never give your life to this person
Who's thoughts by  his own mind
Who's thoughts by his own way
Never give your life to this person
Never never but I'd never do like this person
If you want to take my words as you like as you want
But I am still say, say my words never give your life to person never understand you
Never give your life to person never feel you

                                                                 written By Menaan Mohammed
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Submitted on July 07, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABbA cxxccc cccxdbbcbcdceb cxeAxeAadbB x
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,293
Words 268
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 14, 11, 1

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