My Gal



A passing glance that was all
until a party bought us close and hot as hell.
With mutual friends we danced all night
holding each other it felt so right.
Touching and kissing long into the night.
The heavenly smell of her body so near
made my intentions now so clear.
My weakness for her was my strength to move
departing friends shot me over the moon.
Now alone together it was time to move
while kissing her love started to bloom.
Feeling the heat in a passion filled room
moving slowly and magically in tune.
My tender touch triggering her every move.
As she melted into my hands
the temperature rose
to more than I could stand.
Feeling weak gaining strength every minute
with just one wish that she was in it.
My bedroom now... lets take it to the limit!
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Submitted on November 25, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCCDDEFEGGFEHIJKLK
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 739
Words 142
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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