My fear of loosing you



Do not blame me in this chariot of light
Taking me on a journey
The ride is more interesting
As you decorated me with fresh lilies

Heaven is here in my parted life
Billowing me into air like a whirl smoke
As every moment is loving
And peacefulness clad my dream of oness

Take me by the hand like i walk with,
my mother.
I know the tempt that shadows your content
But i am in shaking of loosing my stand

Let our conscience be our mediator
Hence you remember my punishment
I voluntarily sacrificed for your comfort
The intruders come after your heart but negligence

Pretend not and glance through your listed rules
That bind the soul of this union
As your awareness bring me laughter
At zero point of breaking out of understanding

I am just trying my best to hook you in my promise
Then pay off my blame
To decide my right and wrong
If found guilty of breaking my heart...,and my fear,
lingers on............
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Submitted by Bossmanas on August 04, 2014

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Scheme XXAB XXAB XCXX CXXX XXCA XXXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 882
Words 170
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5

Dumka Vincent

I am a lover of poem.I love to read and write and my first letter was addressed to my headmaster,requested that he assist my mother to pay off my school exammination fee.At the age 6 years,I had already started writing my short story books.But though,some life experiences had also contributed towards my continuous effort to face the challenges of life.I had written series of prose,articles andwith my little experienced poetry is part of my whole life,when I sing in poetry,speak in poetry,settle scores in poetry,discuss in poetry etc.My dedication towards poetry out of my utmost concern is to be Known for my credibility,participatory efforts in my personal achievement and divine from God.Poetry is part of my life.May poetry.com live on (Dumka Richard Vincent.L more…

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