my fate



my fate lies in the hands of one.
he's my farther, my friend, my savior'
i live my life; and try to be strong.
for him on my best behavior.

i know when i see his face.
every feature so perfect,
surviving life isn't the case,
because i am his servant,

i've waited so long for his life ,
i sought out place,
it's such an awesome sight.
in his house there is no disgrace,

now i'm here; i finally arrived,
as i take sight of the beautiful gate;
now i could never be deprived.
cause i am with god and living my fate
please come home and stay
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Submitted on August 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BXBX XBXB CDCDX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 520
Words 108
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5

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