Mr Jones!... Put Down the Pen!!!



Ignorant people... ... ..
Shut the eff up!!

Narrow minded opines
assault!
Bludgeoned there
with well thought care...
basted over time.

Repeated mediocrity
inundates.
denouncing anything...
Ronald Mcdonald didn't say

Yur mentally branded
with comercialized vision.
A feedback loop
that strains to burst my ears!

Stuff yur face with sugared hate
and greasy words...
Consume your own bowels!!
A quarter pounder at a time!!

LEAVE MY PAGE!!
Trespasser!!
with the deep south in yur head.
Hater!!
I spit you on the ground!!
Why bother cutting eye holes
in the brand new sheets?
Blind man!!
Wear the big red shoes of stupidity!
Everyone else knows yur a clown!
...Why can't you see?
Oh ya,....stupid mediocrity..

I shake my head, ..sighing. "Just leave..."

R Andrews
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Submitted on November 15, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XX AXBBC DAXX XXXX XXXC XBXXXXXXDXDD X XX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 734
Words 126
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 4, 4, 4, 12, 1, 2

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