Mother Father Two (the sequel)



Mother father tell me why,
your angry and so sad.
When all your petty wounds,
you said are from being mad.

Mother father tell me why,
madmen are so mad.
p*ss it because the madness,
p*ss what always made them mad?

Mother father tell me why,
madness is so mad.
p*ss madness so delusional,
for the mad to kill the mad?

Mother father tell my why,
madmen are so mad.
p*ss madness all they feel,
or is mad what made them mad?

Mother father tell me why,
madness is so mad.
When all the maddest things,
are what made you both so mad.

[written at age 17, I am currently seventeen now. Honest reviews welcom]
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Submitted on February 05, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Abxb ABxb ABxb aBxb ABxb x
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 579
Words 115
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

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