Make it wonder



I wish for .......died
 thousands times I tried
 Walk to own graveyard
 Because I know..
 how this heart torn apart……..Ladya Sunny

I miss the dead
Your heart and mind well read
It is so painful
Hurting so much feeling remorseful

Why do I feel for you?
Is that what I think is true?
As if you are so near
Loved one and so dear

Not your words speak alone!
All effectiveness is done
I feel each word
We need to move only forward

I hold your hand and reassure
May not be that much sure
Yet I move with your feeling
That comes from heart and willing

I whish o could be your side
Feel deeply and share it as wide
Stay with you and offer comfort
Shall I seize the boat and take you to port?

It has shaken me with grief
Even though we have met very brief
Let us open new leaf
A new chapter in life

I long for happiness
A bright shine of red face
What an unique feeling for a new friend
I wish it to remain forever and ill an end

You are hurt but not finished
I hoped and definitely wished
You are now my friend and well wisher
Let us join and make it wonder
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Submitted on March 29, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXXX BBCC DDEE XXFF GGHH AAXX IIIX XXJJ KKLL
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,017
Words 215
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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