Loving you



You say you love me
You say you always will,
Mom and dad.
But what about you?
Always fighting
Throwing words
Yelling and screaming
Why do you hate each other?
Im wondering what went wrong
I thought you two were strong/
We had a perfect life
Dad and mom, husbend and wife.
Don’t lie, don’t make us cry.
Tell me, has your love died?
I hate you when you fight
You guys have lost sight
Of whats really right.
Forgive and forget
Please don’t do something we’ll all regret.
You say you love me,
You say you alwaus will.
Mom and dad…what about you?
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AbcdefeghhiijklllmmAbd
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 530
Words 104
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22

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