Love song



i once said that age is but a number but you proved me wrong
i once thought that what we had was forever like you hear in a love song

i love you to say anything else is a lie i gave you my heart, my body , my everything
but now my heart just cries that unforgivible sin as i sit here and see the love die

i guess this was a challege only a game to you something you couldn't have the first night
congradulations you had me what a great man ironicly that you were the one who taught me how to be grand

you who said don't do this but do that you the one who i told don't take that path
but you didn't listen and took it you failed and fell face flat

you look at our age difference but your worse then me for i'm open minded learn to see what others see
i love you but by the time you funderstand it, it'll be to late because like you're closing the doors to your heart i'm closing my gate

you'll be looking from the outside in wondering how it went wrong
Oops, my mistake i was just thinking of a beautiful love song
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Melissa Torres

These are but written photos of my life, my mind, and those around me captured as best as I could in words. I'm not a trained writer so my style is of no particular way. I have long detailed poems and short to the point ones. My hope is that you can see what I have seen feel what i felt with out braking your head trying to figure out what I meant. Enjoy! more…

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